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Her Love Storey( 16thFor Mark)
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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This is my story what goes on in my head
it haunts me worse when I go to bed,
Even when I go to sleep this story still carries on,
my mind is never at peace, my mind is totally gone,
I miss you, I love you, Don’t want you but need you
everyday a challenge can I get by without you, I don’t want to but have to
what should this broken person do?
It all started back in 97, a mis-guided teen who thought she’d found heaven,
Two or three years after time just past them by,
but then one day in that fourth year all she’d do is cry,
So many things happened, personality’s changed it wasn’t the man she knew,
Yes she made some wrong choices but what’s a girl to do,
Eventually their strength crumbled the trust just faded away
and so she chose the easy way she’d turn and run away,
There were so many times she’d screamed, before they got ignored
and because she didn’t receive that love instead she found herself bored,
Much time she spent thinking of him, hoping he’d still care
Even tho she’d left, she prayed he’d still be there
So many arguments, differences a waste of something so good,
She’d carve his name into her skin just to prove she would,
So now she is without him and him without her, she’ll look to the real heaven above, She’ll cry an eternity in the top of her tower wishing for his love,
I am she, the one who cries, the one who feels so bad,
Have you ever heard such a love story ever end so sad…...
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2004-04-01 16:54:05]
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Re: Her Love Storey( 16thFor Mark)
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by GeorgeJamesDelgado on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:05:06 PM AEST
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| Oh the young with their problems! But I was young once and lost a love that remained with me many years. But you have to take situations as learning experiences. I can feel your strife from the beginning of your poem to its very end. Life is just beginning for you! |
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Re: Her Love Storey( 16thFor Mark)
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:21:59 AM AEST
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| Yes. Things like that are always happening to tenns and even kids alike. I know many people who have gone through your experience. all of the sleepless nights. Forming it into a poem was a great idea though! Awesome work. |
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