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Depression in its Splendour
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:49:28 PM in AEST
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Addictions, conflictions and all this regret
Memories of realities I wish I could forget
Paracetamol, Prozac and all those numbing things
Razorblades, raindrop tears, and all the painful stings
Purple scars, empty thoughts and endless dreary paths
Despairing screams, frustrated cries (and cold, weary laughs)
Psychiatrists, psychologists and psychotherapists
Self-harm records and self-help lists
Isolation, complications, unfamiliar noises
Fear, panic attacks and undecided choices
Recollections of bandages and bloodied steri-strips
Cynicism, criticism, and complicated friendships
I’m tiring of these obsessions and false confessions
I just want out of this suffocating depression
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by arden on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:00:26 PM AEST
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so deep and so full of emotion. this was a really powerful write. nicely done.
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by poison_touch666 on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:02:25 PM AEST
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| I havn't been on for a while till recently and remembered you'ld commented on one of my peom or i had like one of your poems, and wow this is good but it seems like your just getting more depressed, that can't be a good thing. |
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:03:25 PM AEST
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The beast that is depression, attacking without any reason and laying the soul bare.
bingo ;o)
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:22:24 PM AEST
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| wow .. Xpol :) xxx |
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:35:37 PM AEST
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Ooooh, wow, I liked this one a lot . . . also, maybe it was just me, but the rhyme scheme you used kinda seemed like the same sound as that "girls are made of sugar and spice and everything nice", etc. . . . which made it seem all ironic. I like it :).
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:22:05 PM AEST
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amazing Char I can hear where your coming from... it hits me deep.
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:37:38 AM AEST
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| Powerful write and very deep, the emotion in it just hits out at you. |
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:13:45 AM AEST
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| Deppression can be so... what's the right word? DEPRESSING! I can relate to this ... it was well written and kinda fun in a sick way. Anyways, good job! |
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by silent on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:09:14 AM AEST
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;) as larry said, bingo... brilliantly captured
Depression in all it's mind numbing splendour
Silent |
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by JennyFruFru on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:38:01 PM AEST
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| this is sad and so filled with anger and despair....... the world is filled with it as well...... isnt that sad........... such a touching write....... |
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by blueheart on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:12:27 AM AEST
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| All I can say is bravo, truly magnificent. |
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Re: Depression in its Splendour
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:55:11 PM AEST
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Oh, Charlotte, i know what you're talking about believe me! I'm always here for ya honey! Beautiful poem, as always! Remember, no matter what happens, always keep your head high! Many hugs!
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