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On The Edge
Contributed by
Elf
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The wind in my face
As the sun goes down.
My heart begins to race
When I look to the ground.
I step to the brim.
There's no going back.
My gace is grim
As I let my body go slack.
My eyes, I close.
And start to fall.
It's death I chose.
Above all.
When again I see,
I dont believe.
It's you I see.
Here for me.
I sink into your arms
sobbing tears of relief.
How close I came to such harm
Also tears of grief.
That I thought I could leave you
In this world deprived of love.
That I could abandon you
To forever fly like a dove.
Now you hold me close.
Wraped in your arms so tight.
Erasing all my sorrows,
Making everything right.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-04-01 16:34:13]
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Re: On The Edge
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by Saitou-sama on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:22:25 PM AEST
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| Aw... I think I'm gonna cry... This was so well done. Great job! |
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Re: On The Edge
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:16:17 PM AEST
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Great poem. Even better 'cause it was you experience. Beautifuly worded.
Keep writing.
Take care.
David |
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Re: On The Edge
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by Elf on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:25:26 PM AEST
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And to think. I'm in love with the same man today. lol. Its amasing how these things work isn't it?
-*Meric*- |
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