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Ventalation of Death
Contributed by
poison_touch666
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:33:19 PM in AEST
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I write to vent the pain,
But I don't want to write anymore,
Want to wallow in the hate,
Want to tear myself apart,
I like the pain,
It makes me cry,
It makes me bleed,
It makes me feel alive,
The paper absorbs my emmotions,
Each time absorbs a part of me,
Each time slowly killing me more,
Please can't it just be quick.
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poison_touch666
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2004-04-01 16:33:19]
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Re: Ventalation of Death
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by arden on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:09:15 PM AEST
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so full of emotion and depth. really awesome write. well done keep it up.
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Re: Ventalation of Death
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by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:15:37 PM AEST
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| Its not depressing; I actually found it amusing. See, just imagine a bunny with little spectacles on, bleeding to death from its cute little wrists screaming your poem as its writing it. Hahahaha!!! Its hilarious! |
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