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How Do I Know?
Contributed by
norm
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:17:24 PM in AEST
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How do I know you're my own Adaline?
Or you're true to me, dear or that's you on the line,
Nany a man thought he's king of the hill
When in fact he was fooled by a shill.
How do I know you're my peaches and cream?
That you're part of my dream, that you are as you seem,
Many a man thought he held all the cards
When in fact he was led by the guards.
How do I know and I won't ask again,
That you're Yellowstone Park and reliable, when
Many a man thought he knew everything
When in fact he was hung on a string.
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Re: How Do I Know?
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by Remy on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:20:17 PM AEST
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erg... seems you need a few questions answered! lol, great writing! ;0)
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Re: How Do I Know?
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:32:18 PM AEST
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The first line is the best in my opinion. That's a sweet line. Kudos Norm! You did great!
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: How Do I Know?
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:47:52 PM AEST
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Now I do know one thing is true,
these words could come from
no other but you.
You're always fun!
Stitch |
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Re: How Do I Know?
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:32:17 AM AEST
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Teehee Yellowstone Park........that's in my state Norm......watch how you mention that place in your poem....Speak lightly of it, whether reliable or not.
They have great big bears up there. and of you I'll have them see!
What a different poem Norm......kind of a switch from you the ones you mostly write. But I really liked it. It was really all righ!
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