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Dangerous Games
Contributed by
silent
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:07:07 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I sit by the pond throwing seeds of disgust
But punish I will, spilling blood is a must
Blade at your side with a beautiful grin
Twisting and turning sliding slowly within
Blood curdling screams fill the air of the night
That look in your eyes, your pain my delight
I sit by the water the color now red
Tranquillity restored, nothing more to be said.......
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-01 07:07:07]
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:20:13 AM AEST
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| Out of the disgust and after the deed the pain is to me and not to the one. Very good poem, I looked in the mirror. Thank you |
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:32:25 AM AEST
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It's amazing how you packed so much power, strenght and meaning into such a short poem. Inspiringly well written. This poem has real depth. I'm glad I read it.
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:15:48 AM AEST
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OUCH! I love the first line. This is dark, sharp, and quick.
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:41:06 AM AEST
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| *Coughcough* Note to self: Never get on your bad side. Nice poem, liked the couplet structure and even though it's short it still manages to thrill you. Well done. Another beer? :) |
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:23:31 AM AEST
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deep and meaningful a really enjoyable read.
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by arden on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:45:22 AM AEST
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ohhhh this was so cool. so chilling and dark and the flow was so awesome!
i just love this. well done.
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:19:47 PM AEST
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Very Well Done :-) I Enjoyed Reading This Poem.....Very Dark Write....Loved It.......
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:57:52 PM AEST
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Ahhhh gave me the shivers... that was a really chilling poem, so much in so little words... i could almost imagine myself next to the pond, watching what was going on... thank you for sharing Silent, got my entire body to react... :)
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by Saitou-sama on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:43:43 PM AEST
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| This sent shivers up my spine. It was so captivating even though it was so short. The only problem I have is the length. I need more! |
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Re: Dangerous Games
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:36:17 AM AEST
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ooh very dark.. i love it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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