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Love
Contributed by
silent
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:55:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I often question why me
You often ask why not
With this brings a hatred of people
Which is only eclipsed, by a love of their innocence
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silent
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2004-04-01 06:55:10]
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Re: Love
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:42:23 AM AEST
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Reminds me of Deana Carter's song, "Strawberry Wine":
Is it really him/ or the loss of my innocence/ I've been missin' so much?/
I like it. Lots of thought went into this one. Great poem.
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Re: Love
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:00:13 PM AEST
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Another amazing write by a seriously exceptional poet. Silence, I do not disagree...you said it all Perfectly... :)
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Re: Love
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:53:22 AM AEST
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Oh, I love the last line. Accepting our own reality can be the hardest thing. How well I know that. You have put all that in 4 well-written lines. Fantastic.
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