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You're Never Alone
Contributed by
saveMEfromMYSELF
on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:41:13 AM in AEST
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She crys alone
It hurts inside
No one seems
To hear nor care
A constant silence
No one asks
No one sees
All she needs is her savior.
She crawls along the foor
She's crying out for help
Still no one cares
For the first cry of a helpless being.
Nothing seems to work
No one seems to see
Might as well
Just meet the end
White roses and tears
Large croud of lives she touched
Mom feels bad Dad feels worse
But no one noticed her cry for help
When some one asks
Answer and help
'Cause it's hard to
See through a facade.
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Re: You're Never Alone
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by Dove on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:09:55 AM AEST
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Very beautiful
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Re: You're Never Alone
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by silent on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:11:36 AM AEST
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I agree completely, a keen awareness is the key, unfortunately those who have not been through it can have a hard time recognising it. Touching and truthful write, well done.
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Re: You're Never Alone
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:22:53 PM AEST
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| thx for commenting on my poem, i though id take the liberty of reading & commenting on yours :), this is so full of pain, i can really feel it... if this is how you feel, i hope you find that saviour soon... great poem! |
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Re: You're Never Alone
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:09:28 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. Very good poem. If you need anyone to talk to just PM me.
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