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What Is A Woman
Contributed by
Rylo
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:51:02 AM in AEST
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I once heard a man say, that a woman
was just good for cleaning
around the house, and for a good time
in the bedroom.
I was pretty disturbed by all that nonsense.
So I turned to that man, and told him
my theory of a woman.
Now to me a woman is a great gift
from God.
She puts up with all of our bad habits.
She takes care of our children,
And she keeps us in line whenever we are slipping.
She is like a pale white dove,
with a heart so full of love.
Women want to live their lives
just like us men,
and that is fine with me.
A woman to me,
Is just the perfect meaning
of beauty.
I think if men could do half,
of what a woman does
The world would be a better place.
People world wide could then,
live each day with a smile on their face.
We would never have war,
and always there would be peace.
Some say yeah, but women
are to emotional, well
guess what, so are we.
Women deserve respect, love,
honesty, truth, and
so much more that I could
think of.
So just remember to think,
where would we be without a woman
to keep us in line.
I think this is something
we should all keep in mind.
Your woman should be your best friend
For the day you said I do
She became yours to the end.
And she deserves nothing less,
for she thinks you're the best.
Personally I think we ask to much
from our women.
We are always expecting more
than they can give.
Sure they don't mind doing for their man,
but what are they to do,
when they have done all they can.
We need to start giving back,
before a woman is something we all lack.
A woman loves to be romanced
With soft music, and maybe a midnight dance.
They love bubble baths
filled with rose petals, and candle light.
A woman loves to hear thank you,
every now and then,
and an I love you, when you lie down for bed.
A woman likes to hear
sweetie how was your day,
or is there anything I can help you with,
before I am on my way.
So as a real man
why don't you all do
the best you can.
For after all without a woman
we are nothing,
but just a poor excuse of a man.
Copyright ©
Rylo
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Re: What Is A Woman
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:01:28 AM AEST
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Extraordinary piece of rare male insight! Being a woman I have to say I agree wholeheartedly with you. (lololol). You are right though, seriously, we just wanted to be treated equally and yet like a woman. That is only fair between the sexes. Thanks for noticing.
My best to you,
Rita |
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Re: What Is A Woman
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:03:06 AM AEST
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| Very powerful poem, it spreads the message loud and clear. Well done. |
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Re: What Is A Woman
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:54:21 AM AEST
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I'll Agree With You On This Poem We Only Want To Be Treated With Respect And Be Treated Equally :-)
Nicely Written..... LoL Only If My EX B/F Would Have Felt This Way We Would Still Be Together Today......
I Love This Thanks:-)
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: What Is A Woman
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by AliB on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:07:21 PM AEST
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Here here. Great poem, we should all be treated equally, the world would be a better place, thanks for this.
Ali xx |
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Re: What Is A Woman
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:51:22 PM AEST
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| i wish their were more guys in the world that thought so highly of women as you do... you give me faith in mankind :) |
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