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Remember My Love
Contributed by
Rylo
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:25:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Let me give you the comfort of my death
Music and the scent of roses
Are just some of what's left
As the conquering army marches through town
Images of my past life will be found
Close your eyes and speak in prayer
For I'll make the wind blow through your hair
Even though you don't understand why
Just remember
You can find me in the midnight sky
Kiss me once more for old time's sake
Just before
They lay me to rest near the lake
Then follow the moon with me till morning
For being with you I'll be yearning
I no longer need my dreams
So I left them all to you
I just hope you can
Make them all come true
And as you run your hand across my face
Remember we will meet again
At another time, and
Another place.
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-04-01 02:25:49]
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Re: Remember My Love
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by Avis_Nigra on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:44:09 AM AEST
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deeply and truely felt... some details do not add up to me, but since this is adressed to a special person, it will presumably make sense to her (him?).
"I no longer need my dreams
So I left them all to you"
I love this picture very much.
Thank you!
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Re: Remember My Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:04:11 AM AEST
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This is so beautifully penned. I will have to watch for your work more closely. Your work is lovely.
Rita |
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Re: Remember My Love
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:39:57 AM AEST
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Absolutely Beautiful !!!!!! I'll Be Watching Out For More Of Your Work AlSo :-)This Is Great...LoVed It....
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: Remember My Love
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by redsleeve on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 03:04:02 AM AEST
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| very nice write. lots of emotion, i liked the ending very much. |
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