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Forever
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:12:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Forever,
i've tryed to be a better man.
I do what I need.
I know my actions arent correct,
but who's are.
This candle that burns within,
is screaming for release.
I taste death.
It lingers on my tongue.
Awaiting for the right time to deploy itself.
Would you ever question god.
Would you ever question how to pray.
Would you question the odds.
Make me pay.
Sewn in my skin.
Theres no room for movement.
The ink stains my eyelids.
I scream for escape.
Entrapment.
I beg for your forgivness.
I need you like air.
You sustain me.
You are me.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-04-01 01:12:48]
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Re: Forever
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by Remy on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:55:01 PM AEST
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"somebody needs a hug!" -gir. so dark and dreary, hope you don't wallow in it too long... nice poetic darkness of a write! ;0)
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Re: Forever
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:06:45 PM AEST
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ahhh my favorite.
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Re: Forever
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:48:08 AM AEST
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real emotions shown welldone and dont give up
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