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Goodbye Kiss

Contributed by BrokenHeartedLass on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:49:09 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



One more burning tear to cry,
One last look at the night,
One more glance into a mirror,
to be repulsed at the sight.

Tonight is my final night,
I won't see day ever again,
It seems that being ugly
wasn't my only scarlet sin.

Too fat, too dumb, just not right,
I couldn't fit in at all,
I spent so many hours sitting
just waiting for someone to call.

I lived, I love and all for naught,
I didn't receive one single thanks,
If good deeds really earned me points,
I'd be among the highest angels' ranks.

Still No calls, no cards, no outstretched arms,
No one to hold a light for me,
So to the world now one kiss goodbye,
And Through my death I'll be seen.




Copyright © BrokenHeartedLass ... [ 2004-04-01 00:49:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Goodbye Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by mystiquepearl on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:02:04 AM AEST
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good written..touching...i would just want to say..if you dont mind..that when you give and love do it free-willingly..and do not expect for a return..you should find happiness in knowing you made someone happy...you're beautiful so lift up that beautiful face of yours and start smiling..you'll notice the world would be smiling with you...


Re: Goodbye Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:35:27 AM AEST
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beautifully expressed feelings, im here if you'd like to talk, my pms are not working right so email me at: oldengmastiff@hotmail.com big hugs n' love nessa


Re: Goodbye Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:39:40 AM AEST
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I've spent my entire life listening to my family and friends gripe about their lives and listening to all their woes and picking up their pieces and I'm expected to be there to do that. This past month, my life too has fallen apart because I wasn't "enough" or I was "too much" of something to my now ex-fiancee and also to my current co-workers. Now that I need them, my friends and family seem to have disappeared. I made the decision today that I don't have to wait for the phone to ring or for someone to pull up into my driveway, because we aren't ever going to be "enough" or we're always going to be "too much" to somebody. We, as individuals, must find worth in ourselves. It's our lives that we're living... and only we can make them special. If you are serious about this, which I hope you aren't, I hope you check your messages before you do anything drastic. Death is always the one decision that can't be erased.
Love always,
Ginsdance


Re: Goodbye Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:53:17 AM AEST
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omg this is such a sad poem! But its really really good! thats an awesome poem and i REALLY liked it! I think you should have hope becuz i know deep inside that good things will happen to you, the bad things happen to those *****y snobby people. I think the people who are going through rough times and are suffering for stupid reasons should be happy and I know great things will happen to you and you sound like a very nice person. Best wishes to you:) I luved ur poem so much, poetry can set you free so keep writing!*
Much Love!!!
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Re: Goodbye Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:46:55 AM AEST
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Very good write, but I see two sides when I see one, there is a reason one steps out of sight, maybe you were in his light and you chose for a moment to cast light on another, no one wishes to become second to none. Your words provoke much thought. Thanks for sharing.


Re: Goodbye Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Crash on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:54:40 AM AEST
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The feeling of being out of sight, a great topic, and you used it better than i have ever seen. you are a great poet, so keep up the good work, you will be seen




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