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Contributed by
marsh62287
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:51:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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what with time
can we do
make a future
to build anew
maybe even
remember a path
when friends were everything
with love everywhere
you just a child
fun was your thing
what about your present
where every moment counts
so you can shape that future
and presnt will become that past
then future to present
till our time runs out
day in and day out
till life runs out
so no time to worry
cause tomorrow
it may be over
so have fun now
or time shall run out
Copyright ©
marsh62287
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2004-03-31 23:51:38]
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Re: end
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:27:23 AM AEST
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so true we should all enjoy ourselves today, an enjoyable read.
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Re: end
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:00:09 AM AEST
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wow that makes me worry a lil bit.. i mite not be a live tomorrow! Great write! i luved how u put it, Xcellent!!* kEEp it ^! N kEEp writen!!!!!:)
*much luv*
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