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Me
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:37:09 PM in AEST
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My face so pale
My heart so broken
I walk down the halls
Without a word spoken
I laugh with my friends
But its ovious they cant see
Who theyre friends with
Isnt the real me
You see Mona Lisa smile
But shes not really happy
Theres not much to say
But I feel the same way
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2004-03-31 23:37:09]
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Re: Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:32:18 AM AEST
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It's true nobody really knows what's going on inside your head. good write.
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Re: Me
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:42:15 AM AEST
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| WOW i have felt like this before! This is a wonderful peice of work! Keep it up! |
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Re: Me
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by silent on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:40:45 AM AEST
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Like living inside wearing a mask, as most of us do. Unfortunately that's life, oh what a wonderful fake life. Gotta love what society has become, this was very well written.
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