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Hanging
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:13:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart feels like its hanging
Ready to let go
If it falls no one will catch it
Because no one seems to know
I've been heart broken
No one seems to care
They just focus
On what I seem to wear
If anyone found me hanging
Theyd look from left to right
Then theyll barry me
Deep within the night
But when Im gone
They wont see
I died for love
Because of someone I wanted to be
If I had a choice to change things
I wouldnt for sure
Because then hell know how much I loved him
And that there was never a cure
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xoblondiebabix3
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2004-03-31 23:13:52]
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Re: Hanging
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:36:19 AM AEST
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This is a really good write! Good job! i really like this line
Because then hell know how much I loved him
And that there was never a cure
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Re: Hanging
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by Queen_Dolly on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:44:13 AM AEST
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Oh my god!
*is lost for words*
This is so pretty and sad..
I love the way you ended it..
Queen_Dolly |
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