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The Ones That Have Fallen
Contributed by
fldadn1
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:15:20 PM in AEST
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Scratch an itch
A switch
And golden walls
Now have to fall
A bang, a boom
A doom
With no going back
The world is black
A spark a start
A beautiful heart
Had begun
Now is done
A war a side
An invisible line
A fight was faught
Now we all must rot
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fldadn1
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2004-03-31 21:15:20]
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Re: The Ones That Have Fallen
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:23:38 PM AEST
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great poem, i know what ur thinking about life and the world and everything
Great write! keep it ^! :):):)
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Re: The Ones That Have Fallen
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by rogad on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:51:31 PM AEST
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Though not so easy to understand, it sounds nice :)
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Re: The Ones That Have Fallen
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:07:34 PM AEST
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| I understand it but I don't quite agree with the ending. |
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