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A Life On Lines

Contributed by fldadn1 on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:09:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

It started with a loneliness
That i had gained over 3 months
I didn't really do anything
The whole time was pretty blunt
In the beginning of September
I had gone to see my Dad
Even though there wasn't much seeing
For once I kind of felt glad
Then school rolled by
Just like an ocean wave
Splashing everywhere
From the raging hurricane
I saw all my friends again
And we all got to talk
To and from all the classes we walked
Then friends got thinner
And people had to choose
I guess i picked a few
Football games started at high school
Where I met someone new
And she met me too
I guess she fell in love
On first sight
But me, I must have been blind
But we talked conversations
On the phone for hours
I acted like quite the coward
To ask her out
I guess I've always been afraid
But finally I did it anyways
It had only been a few days
We had been together
I think we could hav done better
Well we broke up
We would be friends instead
And after that day
I said never again
But only a week or so later
I fell in love with Jillian
She'd broken my heart before
Now I was letting her do it again
We never went out
But she hurt the most
Till this day she holds the record
Everyone outta give her a toast
I'll skip alot of suicide
Well only alot of thoughts
And at home I'd sit in my room
For months there I'd rot
Then got damn love was in the air
And spring was around the corner
Her name was Jackie
I guess I wanted to know her
So me and a bunch of people
All went to hang out
To me though
She was all it was about
Well love cluttered my mind
And thoughts brewed in my head
All those bull dreams
I had when I'd go to bed
I finally wrote a love poem
That I read to her over the phone

"I cannot write love poetry"
"Even now I don't know what to say"
"But hopefully you love me"
"As I do you everyday"

Ya well then I started to hear
Shes been talking behind my back
I could not believe it, in fact I didn't
Then it was over just like that
That was the day
I wrote this poem
Because I think this stories over
And now I've got to go

Copyright © fldadn1 ... [ 2004-03-31 21:09:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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