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Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My wrists are a torn reminder of what was
As my mouth forms bloodied syllables
And an acre of harvested regret
Amidst these many miles I've crawled
Only to wind up... nowhere
Digging my grave with one scarred hand
While mournfully sucking my other wrist
To frame the epitomy of sorrow and wretchedness
I peer out this window
Caked with years of regret
Trying to cry upon this pallet of misery,
But nothing escapes from these blackened lips
Except a choked sob of dashed dreams
As I weep upon these bloodied rocks
And then raise my hands in beaten victory
Yearning for the prospect of a molecule of hope
I kiss this beaten body
As my hands flail to produce nothing
My battered visage crowned with many wounds
Sinks to the floor in shattered dismay
Apart from myself I discern this last action
To raise this poison filled draught
To my yearning, quivering lips
And place this black rose upon my chest
As I drown in this ocean called Solitude
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2004-03-31 21:01:36]
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Re: Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:34:06 PM AEST
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dearest joel, this is sooo excellent, vivid, beautiful in its sadness, your an amazing writer, great job! peace, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:49:29 PM AEST
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| wow joel that was really amazing and beautiful. thank you for sharing that. man its good to be back amongst the unique. |
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Re: Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 10:08:51 PM AEST
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| That was amazing!! The imagery and the eloquence with which you worded it was absolutely fantastic!! WOW. JUST WOW! |
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Re: Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
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by JadedExistence on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:20:58 PM AEST
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Joel, you are an absolutely brilliant poet. This is so beautiful, as is everything else you write. You put so much feeling into your writing. Definitely one of my favorite writers on this site. Amazing.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:18:20 AM AEST
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Excellent write, Joel..great to see you posting again... don't stay away so long again...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:47:13 PM AEST
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It's great to see you posting again. Your stuff is unique joel, and this is so good..
char xx |
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Re: Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
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by doug on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:15:19 PM AEST
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| absolutly fabulous , keep up the great writing your friend , doug |
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Re: Near Erotic Fascination with the Ways of Death
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by Soulless on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:45:17 PM AEST
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This poem is my favorite so far. You have such a way with words that you leave me speechless. you took all the words from me left utter amazement. Your poetry is the kind I always look for, sad but beautiful. The whole poem is dipped in gold and I treasured every second reading it. Truly I did. I hope you dont mind if I book mark it.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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