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How To Make You Love Me
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:16:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I cant make you love me
I wish to god i could,
Carve your name into my skin
Do you believe i would?
Tie you up, pin you down
Look at this princess, you hold her crown,
I cant force you to want me
But believe I'll give it a try,
I wont pleed and i wont beg
Maybe i wont even cry,
Am I a victim
i cant sleep, I cant dream,
Indecision to love you
sometimes makes me scream,
Maybe i could creep in while you sleep
Move my hand over your face,
Remove the pillows that have
taken my place,
While you sleep, lost in dreams
I'd whisper in your ear,
Softly my voice echoes your night
maybe you dream im here,
I could brush past your hair
skim your body by hand,
touch you ever so gently
your warmth like summer sand,
You stir in your sleep
my memory haunting your head,
I feel your breath but you dont know
Im lying in this bed,
Love has broken this person
Should I retaliate?
Its taken all i ever had
And turned it into hate,
Im burning up, mad with fury
Lost in a whirlwind for frontpage storey,
I wake you from peace
to show you Hell,
And its too late i start to Yell..!
I show him the packets (empty)
Explaining one for everytime i thought of him,
700grams of a easy way out
and not what could of been,
So now its me lying in his bed
with his voice echoing my night,
He begs, he pleeds but i wont wake
in morning light,
Your fingers brush through my hair
The touch of your hand,
How to make you love me.?
We'll never understand.....
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
... [
2004-03-31 20:16:05]
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Re: How To Make You Love Me
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:39:47 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this very much yes yes i did:)
Great write! i Njoy ur PoeMs*~
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Re: How To Make You Love Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:58:04 PM AEST
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| AAWW A very touching poem,well done! Christina |
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Re: How To Make You Love Me
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by gery_giggles on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:02:09 PM AEST
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wow.....theres anger,sadness and love all in one poem...very good job!....
luv always |
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Re: How To Make You Love Me
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:26:47 AM AEST
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| Wow, I am impressed as your poetry paints such a complete picture of emotional reality which makes the best poetry ever. Many claim to be poet's but fail to create a complete vision or leave the reader wanting more for completeness. Great job. Please have a peak of mine and provide some feedback. Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Mickey Pig Knuckles :o) |
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