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Surfacing
Contributed by
youlied
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:34:46 PM in AEST
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I seem to be lost
Which way is up?
I'm sinking deeper
Into thick black bile
This river is deadly
And this is the end
I'm devoured alive
As I fight my way through
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youlied
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2004-03-31 19:34:46]
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Re: Surfacing
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:53:16 PM AEST
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Personally I liked the second stanza better. Don't know, just kind of seemed more..... deep? Yeah, deep, that's the word. At any rate, it's a nice little write.
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Re: Surfacing
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:38:18 PM AEST
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| ooooo creepy, hugs n' love nessa |
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