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XENIA (2)
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 08:15:25 PM in AEST
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Oh, Xenia my darling, it is still with you
Each time I walk past, you still say it too
One year on, you're still going strong
Every time I see you, I hear your 'loves song'
You say it with all, the warmth of your heart
You send with it, a kiss as a part
I can never be blue, all the time you're around
Because of your "I love you", that's a magical sound
You are my daughter, and you are now five
And now all my life, I am going to strive
To help you hang on, to this magical potion
That you have inside, for it changes all emotions
I don't want you to lose, this wonderful thing
That changes night to day, and makes the birds sing
With this love that you have, so deep down inside
You have a potential, to change a world of bad tides
Mick Puttock
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Re: XENIA (2)
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 09:26:11 PM AEST
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I am sure as the years roll by Mick that Xenia will treasure all the poems written by her dad. I hope that all in all that maybe on her 21st you hand her a book full of verses that you have written for her. great write can feel the love you have for her as do all parents for there youngins'.
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Re: XENIA (2)
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 10:19:42 PM AEST
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| Very touching Mick, a wonderful way to express one's love, |
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Re: XENIA (2)
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 01:25:51 AM AEST
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Beautiful, Mick...Xenia must be very special indeed..
Chrissie |
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Re: XENIA (2)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 01:49:54 AM AEST
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Hey Mickster.... "Wise One" will always be the warm and loving girl that she is today.. you have written another beautiful tribute to Xenia and I hope another is coming soon..
Hugs,
Jen |
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Re: XENIA (2)
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by Rose on
Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 10:52:11 AM AEST
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Such wise advice in a beautiful write. I hope too, she can hold on to her innocent love of life, the feelings of children and how open thier minds are....
touching write,
Amber Rose :) |
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