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Of Dancing with Wind
Contributed by
twinkletoes
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 06:25:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Yes that's right I remember, "I love you." was all I said,
As I sat there down beside you, and on my shoulder you placed your head.
That lilted breeze that danced and played, cross the water wide and blue.
Seemed to carry ever stronger
Your words, "I love you too."
We sat and watched the tide carry, our cares and troubles away
As the salty brine splashed and tossed, the seagulls seemed to play.
Such a blueness was in the sky, as if saying this is the perfect time.
To caress and touch you with my deepest love
Oh yes, you a treasure so sublime!
You kissed me ever softly, upon lips that hungered for your touch.
Not petting, not caring but desire hit us with a rush.
We talked of many things that day, of Plato and of Wilde.
And some familiar conversation like;
I wish I knew you as a child.
That day dwells within my heart, the same heart that is ever true.
When we both realized that we have a gift that is given to so few.
A gift of love and of respect and also a shared passion.
Of knowing that each poem we write
is not the perfect fashion.
Yes we kissed so tenderly-my emotions became overwhelmed.
By an intangible experience, mere words can never tell.
It was as real as that day upon the pier, no not a conjured time.
And that moment we shared I think you knew too well.
That my love light was here to shine.
Copyright ©
twinkletoes
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2004-03-31 18:25:26]
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 06:32:40 PM AEST
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oooo breathtakingly beautiful, sooo romantic, perfectly written in style, grace, and just wow, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 06:45:07 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem of love that is ageless and flows as smoothly as a gentle stream in one's mind. Great write, my friend.
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:34:52 PM AEST
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Very Romantic So Beautiful
Loved It......Great Write
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:26:52 AM AEST
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| That was very picturesque....you captured the beauty of romance, well, beautifully. Great write. |
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:02:09 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem written with tenderness and sincerity - a dance of romance.
@-->->->-- Jan |
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by venkat on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:42:08 AM AEST
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Aaah...so picturesque..beautifully done, with warm, tender care and love..you children of beauty..have nice days..God bless you both.
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:59:46 AM AEST
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a real visual write, nice to see you're getting the odd Oscar reference in too, Excellent work.
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:11:09 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful my friend....written from the heart. You know I wish you both the best ;o).
Very well done
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:45:04 PM AEST
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| TT, this is a very beautiful write. Very romantic. Ahhh love is beautiful, isn't it? *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:13:22 PM AEST
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Very nice! What a pleasant poem to read. Love and beautiful weather....a beautiful scene...who could ask for more...but you give the reader not just any old love, but a love that can share so much with the other....*sigh* a perfect love.....great write!
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Re: Of Dancing with Wind
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 11:20:36 PM AEST
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| two poets in love..and by the sea. Wonderful. I can smell......the salt air. |
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