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Loneliness
Contributed by
silent
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:55:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My beautiful picture
It is destroyed
No longer as one
But split in two
Torn and yellowed
Like one from the past
Was it only yesterday
It couldn’t last
A dream gone wrong
We drift apart
Your hand leaves mine
No more entwined
Alone on the beach
The sand and the sea
Are they my friend
Or my enemy
The water is warm
The sand grips my feet
As the wind is a’ whispering
Come into the deep
Copyright ©
silent
... [
2004-03-31 17:55:31]
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Re: Loneliness
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 06:48:28 PM AEST
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ohhh this is so beautiful and so sad, it really moved me deeply, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Loneliness
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by arden on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:13:46 PM AEST
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oh so beautiful yet sad. such a lovely write. well done keep it up.
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Re: Loneliness
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:14:53 PM AEST
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good write and well rhymed.. keep it ^
GuJoB!*~
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Re: Loneliness
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:20:12 PM AEST
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Absolutely enchanting how your words come out into such marvelous peices. I love your writing, its the kind I like. I hope you wont stop.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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