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In Such a Way
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:52:17 PM in AEST
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God loved man
In such a way
He gave His Son
The world to save
Anyone that
In Him believes
Does not die
Eternal life receives
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2004-03-31 15:52:17]
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Re: In Such a Way
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by SAT on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:21:42 PM AEST
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u r a religious righter? coolies! i am very religious and it is cool that you like that passage, and pay attention to it. i love that passage, and u have enough care to read it. good for you, not many pplz read the bible!
Alicia Marie
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Re: In Such a Way
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:36:00 PM AEST
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A well-composed inspirational poem.
Well done. |
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Re: In Such a Way
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:13:52 AM AEST
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Hmm. The last line doesn't quite chime. I think line seven needed a dash after it, like this:
Does not die -
Eternal life recieves.
Not bad, though. Is this an attempt at writing your own paraphrased translation? It's been done, kid.
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Re: In Such a Way
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by arden on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 02:22:01 PM AEST
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short and nice. well done i liked this one.
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Re: In Such a Way
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:27:47 PM AEST
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| its beautiful.. Amen to that :) |
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Re: In Such a Way
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:28:53 PM AEST
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This one is quite short and simple with an age old message.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
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Re: In Such a Way
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:35:12 PM AEST
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Simple and spiritual.Because our gift for writing comes from God, I find it very appropriate that he be present on our work.
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