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Love Forever?
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Love, yes love
Has a sweet call
Though often enough
Makes fools of us all
Can any man
Comprehend love?
Or can it only be answered
By God above?
A little bit
Of love I see
That precious sight
Overpowers me
If the tip of the iceberg
Is all I behold
How can I say
What will unfold?
"Forever I'll love you"
Is easy to say
But what if destiny
Didn't plan it that way?
My love forever
You say you will be
But what of the changes
Today we don't see?
We can't know for sure
What will happen tomorrow
What if today
Our love ends in sorrow?
But often enough
Our fears are unfounded
And things that were said
Weren't meant as they sounded
Words spoken in haste
By wrath overpowered
Weren't rational thoughts
Spoken in love's awesome power
Don't be too hasty
In making a vow
But if the promise is made
Keep it, somehow
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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Re: Love Forever?
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:35:57 PM AEST
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This has a nice ring to it, a flow... it's great. And... you must be in love, because you got the questions and fears perfectly worded. Nice write.
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Re: Love Forever?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:38:02 PM AEST
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| is love forever i really dont ?but your poem brings hope that it so |
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Re: Love Forever?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:15:08 PM AEST
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| yes, always be genuine, great write, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Love Forever?
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:04:36 AM AEST
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Ah, excellent. Your habit of slant-rhyme is beginning to fade. Plenty of wisdom in here for a gawky computer freak like yourself. Nice job.
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Re: Love Forever?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:27:17 PM AEST
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Great advice. Love is a very overpowering emotion and only God knows where it will lead. Patience is a GOOD thing...I think;-)
~Love you,
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Re: Love Forever?
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:16:54 PM AEST
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| Hmmm....this definitely got me thinking David, but ...tip of the iceberg....no tip of the hat for that one. Hahaha. How powerful love is! But should you keep your vow if it goes against God's plan for your life? Mind boggling! |
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Re: Love Forever?
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:59:28 PM AEST
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Despite what Andrew says, I like your rhymes. This one has a nice flow to it.
Love is real. It is just the lovers that are not real sometimes.
Lotsa love and peace be with you,
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Re: Love Forever?
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:41:08 PM AEST
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Very well said. I'm struck by the maturity in the last stanza. It would be great if that was a universal idea.
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Re: Love Forever?
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by brew on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 01:41:05 PM AEST
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Seems the words, the thoughts and all were here.....So....it can be lost, yet, can it? beautiful words that capture a heart. Lots to think on with your writes.
brew~ |
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