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Hugs and Kisses
Contributed by
xDeex
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:36:31 PM in AEST
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The day I saw your face,
I knew there was something special about you.
The day I talked to you,
You filled me up with glee.
When I met you again,
I knew you would change me, all for the better.
And of course... I was right.
At the begging it was all fun and games,
But now it's so much more.
You are in every thought I have,
And every action i make.
You have changed my prospective of life,
And taught me the meaning of love.
Without you,
I honestly don't know where I would be.
Yet, I do know that I couldn't possibly be as happy as you make me now.
You're so much more then a boyfriend,
But a best friend.
I can't explain in words how much I am thankful for all you have done,
But iIcan conclude with this:
I love you more then I ever have anyone before,
And I can't wait for the days to come.
*hugs and kisses*
~*Dee*~
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xDeex
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Re: Hugs and Kisses
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by scott1097 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:41:26 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem and beautiful words i gave you a 4 star because i believe there is only one person who can make such a difference in someones life and that is jesus christ no mortal man can change someones life that drastically. other than that it is a beautiful poem |
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Re: Hugs and Kisses
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:45:22 PM AEST
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This is beautiful!! It's weird how one can come into our world and change it forever, for the better.... Great write, and I wish you all the happiness in your relationship...
*J* |
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Re: Hugs and Kisses
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:08:39 PM AEST
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| very pretty, im happy for you:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hugs and Kisses
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by morelikelyrics on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:14:49 PM AEST
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As much as I believe in the Lord and all his mightyness...
I have to disagree witht he previous comment...
Such love in our lives can completely alter and change our life, within a single moment.
Whehter for the better or for worse, one person can make a big difference.
Yes, Jesus is very very very (stressing very) important to our lives,
BUT, I dont think it was necessary to add that to your comment. It seemed as if you were preaching, rather than commenting upon such a beautiful poem.
As to the matter of the poem, I believe it was very touching, and there is a young man who should be appreciative that there is a another young lady who understands how much he means to her...
~let life be your lyrical song, everyday's the words, every year is a verse, because in the end, there is no 'repeat'~
-Morelikelyrics |
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