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Contributed by
PHILLIPTAYLOR
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Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 08:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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TAKE IN YOUR HAND AND PULL MIND TO YOU
ADD A SPARKEL OF LIGHT TO YOUR EYES
PLACE YOUR LIPS TO MINE
MIX WITH THE SOFT CLOUDS FROM THE SKIES
NOW GIVE A PINCH OF LOVE
ADD YOUR JOYFULL SOUNDS OF LAUGHTER
PLACE FLOWERS ALL AROUND FOR TEXTURE
PLEASURE TO THE NIGHT IS WHAT WERE AFTER
I WILL TAKE YOUR HAND AND PULL YOU TO ME
ADD A TENDER TOUCH DOWN YOUR FACE
PLACE YOU FIRST IN LIFE
MIX LOVE AND A LITTLE FANTASY,JUST A TRACE
STIR MY EMOTIONS IN WITH YOURS
WIP UP BODLY PLAESURE
HEAT UP CONVERSATION WITH A SMILE
PASSION WAY BEYOND MEASURE
HOLD EACH OTHER TILL COMFORTABLE
SMELL THE LOVE MIXING IN LIFES BLENDER
ADD A TEAR OF HAPPINESS
TOUCH TILL TENDER
SERVE WITH THE CHILDREN
TEACH THEM ABOUT LOVE AND HOW TO SHARE
MIX EVERY THING WITH THEM
WATCH THEM GROW AND TEACH OTHERS HOW TO CARE!
Copyright ©
PHILLIPTAYLOR
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2002-09-21 20:05:14]
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 01:29:56 AM AEST
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This is lovely...beautiful sentiments Phillip
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 07:05:52 AM AEST
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Lovely recipe... makes for a good meal, I imagine...(A bit of editing is needed tho.)
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by Rose on
Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 09:09:44 PM AEST
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very touching write. For your age, you have a very good emotional, sensual feeling of this recipe.
Not bad, considering this is your 10 or so time on a computer? What Jenni Means about editing, you might want to use your Word or Works program to help you edit your spelling. Jenni is a lovely soul, she teaches school kids.
I hope all does work for you. Your writings have a sensual touch of feeling.
Good write,
Always, Amber Rose :) |
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