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smile
Contributed by
moon_light
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:35:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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smile its all over.
smile it will be ok.
the sun is out,
the day is bright.
the crying's over.
your heart is home.
smile thare's no reason to cry.
smile don't let the day go by.
hold your head up high.
stare in to the sky.
smile all is right.
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moon_light
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2004-03-31 12:35:31]
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Re: smile
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:40:26 PM AEST
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| its cute and im so happy for you about your mom :) |
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Re: smile
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:40:33 PM AEST
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| Good optimistic piece of poetry one thing spoils it though check your spelling. Greetings from bernard. |
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Re: smile
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by scott1097 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:20:45 PM AEST
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| HEY IM HAPPY FOR YOUR MOM AND THIS POEM MADE ME SMILE. HAVE A GREAT DAY |
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Re: smile
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:52:29 PM AEST
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| what a sweet loving poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: smile
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by thumper on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:25:35 AM AEST
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This was really good. It speaks of the relief that you felt when your mom was improving. Write on, Jen, Write on!
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: smile
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:00:52 PM AEST
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hey jen whats up nice poem well ill be writing a new one soon i hope well g2g bye
DEMON |
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