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The Best Night
Contributed by
jupiter
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:34:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Being with you,
Under the star lit night,
Looking in your eyes,
Seeing the beauty of the stars in your eyes,
The moon shining brightly,
Showing the most beautiful face there is,
Wondering how I got so lucky,
Tears of joy and happiness,
Falling down from my eyes,
Knowing I've never been this happy,
For this night I will never forget,
For nothing in the world
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jupiter
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2004-03-31 09:34:50]
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Re: The Best Night
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by ILuvKyleKorver26 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:53:48 AM AEST
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this is a really good poem, it seems like u are you gf are in a good relationship i just wish i had someone that special
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Re: The Best Night
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by Levi on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 10:21:25 AM AEST
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| Sap. You are a big sap. But I say that in a goodway. I'm among the sappiest saps in the world. Though I still need to find out what it's like to go on a date. It's a good poem, if but that it seems cut short. I don't know I mean the shortness may be what it needs however, it ends abruptly. It makes it appear like you only want that night, and after that nothing. But that's just my perception. Good poem. Later days. |
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Re: The Best Night
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:12:46 AM AEST
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really enjoyed this, as i'm sure your girlfriend will wheny you spend that night.
wildejohnny
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Re: The Best Night
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by Coaster on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:54:31 PM AEST
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Great touch of romance and love to the poem. Know exactly what the feeling is that you show in this write. Keep it up. Look foward to reading some more of your stuff!
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