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Ezra's Song
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:06:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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One day as the mist brushed up against the air
I felt a stirring of a restless heart in strife
The wind was dying against the day
I knew that something was coming.
I heard the whispered warnings but
I knew not where to look
That hesitation cost us all
the pleasant dreams we possessed
And so it is we drown in our lowly regrets...
Ezra, I felt it as you fell to your temptation
Ezra, everything fell apart with one taste of that sugar
Ezra, I cried as you succumbed to your temptation
Ezra, don't you know the angels wept as your spirit died?
If only you would still believe
that there are people who have alwaya loved you
People who would die for you to come home
If only you could still believe
We are all worth far more than we suppose
You are loved...you are loved...and that matters
Come home.
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Re: Ezra's Song
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:19:02 AM AEST
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Oohh..beautifully emotional ..what a sincere heartfelt, heart touching write..Dear Girl..your poem is captivating...venkat
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Re: Ezra's Song
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 10:33:20 AM AEST
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Interesting write. I love the line about us all being worth more than we suppose---such a truth that so few see.
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Re: Ezra's Song
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:13:58 PM AEST
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| wow Riot, that was beautiful. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Ezra's Song
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:42:03 AM AEST
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I must agree with venkat, captivating....my first thought was, beathtaking. True depth is here.
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Re: Ezra's Song
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by blueheart on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:37:31 AM AEST
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| There is a wonderful message behind this poem. I loved the way you expressed it so well. And I especially liked the part where you say that we are worth much more than we care to believe. Amazing write. |
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Re: Ezra's Song
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 05:35:38 AM AEST
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| Great poem but just don't really understand the first part of the poem. Sounds great anyway. cya! |
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Re: Ezra's Song
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:38:10 PM AEST
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| You have definately portrayed the message in this write in my eyes. Such a sad write. You have painted a big picture with this. Such a loss. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Ezra's Song
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:35:58 PM AEST
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| excellent write. emotional and beautiful. |
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