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Torn
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:08:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I cry when I am angry
I cry when I am sad
I cry when I have lost all the things I ever had
Sometimes Im filled sorrow
Sometimes Im filled pain
Sometimes I cant control the things that are going on today
I feel that I have hurt you
I feel that you are sad
I feel that I have caused you more pain than what you had
I wish that you could tell me, how you really feel
I wonder if the thoughts I have are even close to being real
I think that you may love me
I think I love you too
But I think we're in perdicerments and dont know what to do
I dont know why i bother
I dont know why i try
I dont why im asking you at this point in time
Maybe its true love, maybe its just lust
Maybe we enjoy just hanging out with us
I thought Id say Im sorry
I dont know what to do
all i know is that I cant cease to think of you!
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-03-31 03:08:54]
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Re: Torn
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:27:08 AM AEST
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| Ooh..it is sad..but all your feelings well expressed..venkat |
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Re: Torn
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:22:45 AM AEST
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| Emotional and sad piece...the first verse especially touched me. Well done. |
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Re: Torn
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 10:27:11 AM AEST
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I really liked the flow of this poem! Hmm the difficulties in a relation....Very well expressed!
Anne :D |
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Re: Torn
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by arden on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:51:19 PM AEST
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so so sad and yet the flow is so beautiful. i love this one. well done.
Arden |
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Re: Torn
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:00:03 PM AEST
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I echo all the above comments...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Torn
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by gery_giggles on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:27:09 PM AEST
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this is so sad,thers so much emotion...continue the good work!
luv always |
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Re: Torn
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:11:45 AM AEST
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| hope you find love...i miss the feeling. follow youre heart, youve got a good one lol...very good write. your words are increadible |
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Re: Torn
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:44:53 AM AEST
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NICELY WRITTEN & VERY THOUGHT OUT!
YOU DID A GREAT JOB WITH THIS!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: Torn
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:46:17 AM AEST
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What a tearing dilemma. Good write that keeps haunting you.
Hur |
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Re: Torn
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:29:13 AM AEST
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I agree.
Very sad but great writing!
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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