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Who Am I?
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:18:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When I look in the mirror
I'm not sure what I see
Am I the happy, excited teenager?
The scared and lonely little girl?
Or someone in between
My reflection's cloudy
And I don't know what's really there
I don't know who I am
Or who I want to be
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2004-03-31 02:18:45]
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Re: Who Am I?
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:23:30 AM AEST
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| Join the crowd I feel the same... short and sweet and to the point... nice work |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:35:01 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this so much...well-written and straight to the point. |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:47:06 AM AEST
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| You are not alone in your search.....so many questions and no satifaction in the answers,when you can get them...I feel the flow of this one. |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by piggy on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:06:45 AM AEST
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| I dig ya, I've been lost for years |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Dralion on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:44:06 AM AEST
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Speaks for a lot of people of all ages.
Keep writing and looking, something will emerge. |
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