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GHOST
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:35:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I am the ghost
that keeps you awake
listening
with your eyes
to eerie sounds
that ah
chill you to the bone,
i am the ghost
oh boooo baby
creeping
across creaky wooden floors
and ya can
hear the footsteps echo...
your heartbeat races
as i slowly pull your covers
d
o
w
n
and you're wondering
what could be happening
as you hear a voice
softly whispering
"I love you baby. "
I am the ghost
that is haunting
cause i need your love
but you can't see me,
you're never alone
i am always
creeping whispering
wanting.....
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-03-31 01:35:06]
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Re: GHOST
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:25:30 AM AEST
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| wow thats really creepy.... and so deep... nice job! :) |
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Re: GHOST
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:05:49 AM AEST
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| Oooh, I like how you wrote this ... very different, intriguing, and great topic... Jan |
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Re: GHOST
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:28:05 AM AEST
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Nice angle on a ghost story, with an undertone of malice and lacivisousness.
Good work. |
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Re: GHOST
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:50:47 AM AEST
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Well baby u can creep upon me anytime!
Very good!
Doesn't scare me 'cause there is such thing as astro projection.
LUV, HUGGS,
emy |
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