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not enough

Contributed by Cancer on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:19:56 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



(N)...i love you

(n) but you don't love me enough

(N) that depends
on what enough is
i love you enough
to have stayed with you
through everything so far
isn't that enough?

(n)....no
it's not enough

(N) so what is enough?

(n).....i don't know
but this isn't it

(N)..(sigh)
what do you want from me?

(n) more than you can ever give me

(N) so why don't you leave me?

(n) i stay to remind you
that you have failed me
and to prove to you
that you will never love me enough

(N) so you are like a punishment
my castigation so to speak

(n) i don't know what castigation means
but if i'm such a punishment
then why don't YOU leave?

(N) BECAUSE I LOVE YOU
YOU STUPID *****
.......
sorry, that came out wrong
i stay because i love you enough to do so
ok?

(n)...whatever

(N) do you love me enough?

(n) i don't love you at all
but i used to
until i realized
that you didn't love me enough
now i hate you
i'd rather be with anyone but you
but i stay
to remind you
of every way you fail me

(N) honestly babe
sometimes i could just strangle you

(n) yeah, i bet you'd like to get rid of me wouldn't you?
but i won't go that easily
think you can just use me and throw me away, huh?
think i'm just some ki...

(N) hey hey hey
calm down
it was a joke
(sorta)

(n) whatever.
..... i gotta go

(N) just like that?

(n) just...like...that

(N) fine. love you.

(n) but not enough
never enough




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2004-03-31 01:19:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: not enough (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:43:47 AM AEST
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Love this flow...life is a ball of confusion....and emotional torture is almost to much to bear....hang in there.


Re: not enough (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:09:35 PM AEST
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this was wierd man I didn't get it :P

Bobo (Joel)




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