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Upon Every Star And The Moon
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:27:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Gently caressed by your soft fingertips.
Kissing me wetly as we lay together.
Soft satin sheets and jasmine candles burn slow.
Whispered, "I love you's" softly resonate.
A breeze was never warm nor soft enough
To match your loving touch bestowed upon me.
Always flew free like a whispering dove.
Your name to me synonymous forever with love.
Your hand always found mine whenever I smiled.
Reassuringly put arms around me as I cried.
My heart will forever be only in your hands.
No matter the cold or distance of all the lands.
The sands of time will come and go,
but I promise my love will remain.
This is something that took a lifetime to obtain.
It will endure in a million spoken words.
Coming strong in just as many songs.
It will show through in every written word.
My promise to you will always stand true.
If you ask my love, I will let you in.
My heart and soul, my very being is yours
forever, and ever, and always, the truth.
Silver Kiss
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-03-31 00:27:00]
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:03:29 AM AEST
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A very lovely soft and gentle declaration of love. I truly enjoyed this piece.
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:32:41 AM AEST
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That's gorgeous!!! Somehow I'm jealous. Love the title!!! Mmmmmmm, satin sheets and jasmine candles..... *wanders off to daydream*
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:09:27 AM AEST
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I Love How You Wrote This :-)
Very Romantic Description
"Soft Satan Sheets And Jasmine
Candles Burn Slow" :-) Lovely
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:13:42 AM AEST
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*trying to snap out of a dream* Hey wow what an awesome romantic poem!!!!! It's really great!! What a beautiful love declaration! Superb write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:15:06 AM AEST
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| So romantic & beautiful! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:45:33 PM AEST
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| Endearing and soft. Like viewing a couples private moment and finding it incredibly beautiful. When you're with that special person nothing else matters. Now I am getting all mushy and sappy so i'll stop. Beautiful poem and the title was perfect. Kie |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by Putteragain on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:34:17 PM AEST
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jeff you have such beautful words enough to melt any womans heart love it
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:03:13 PM AEST
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*smiles*
*keeps smiling*
*continues to smile, oblivious*
*shakes self out of reverie* Wha--?!
Oh, yeah, sorry, the poem . . . whoa. I think I'll just implore you to write more like this in the future and continue smiling.
*smiles*
--Nora |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:07:07 PM AEST
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wow this was very calming and very poetic you continually amaze me as your dark poetry and love poetry are both equally great.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:55:24 PM AEST
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Just amazing. So beautifully done. The flow was very soft. Great write. I loved this.
Arden
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:23:23 PM AEST
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a beautifully crafted poem.
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:44:42 PM AEST
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| Jeff...i haven't read any of your poetry for a long time and I am glad and read this one first. It sounds like you have gotten the best gift of life...love. I miss talking to you and this is such a great poem. You are such a great poet! Love always:::Kirby |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:10:52 AM AEST
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| Wow, I wish I could write like that. Sensuous and beautiful write, well done. |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:28:37 PM AEST
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I don't know how I missed this, but I am glad I finally found it. This is breathtaking Jeff. I would dare to say your best romatic write ever.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by persia on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:08:58 AM AEST
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very romantic and soft
persia |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:27:08 PM AEST
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| wow! |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:40:53 AM AEST
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| Very well written. Vividly reminding me of what I'm missing out on right now in life. *laughs* Anyway, great piece. (as if everyone else hasn't told you already, j/k) =P |
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Re: Upon Every Star And The Moon
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 05:26:58 PM AEST
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God only knows why it took me so long to see this incredible masterpeice of magic.
It reminds me of someone and I In Winter Haven, Florida,USA.
Leaves me in awe.
luv, huggs, humogeous smiles,
emy |
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