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June 16
Contributed by
Parrotwing
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Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:19:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Today, dressed in white
I would have taken your hand
forever and always.
Life is cruel to some; those who love most must give most
and keep less than nothing.
You have changed so much,
become shallow and heartless.
I do not know you now.
There was a time when our future shone bright as love.
Time, and you, travel on...
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2004-03-31 00:19:54]
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Re: June 16
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:29:25 AM AEST
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'You have changed so much,
become shallow and heartless.
I do not know you now.
There was a time when our future shone bright as love.
Time, and you, travel on...'
I liked that part. It was very powerful. Nice. |
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Re: June 16
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:43:14 AM AEST
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| Very sweet. Well, in some kind of sad = sweet way. =/ Well, good job nonetheless. |
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Re: June 16
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:31:03 AM AEST
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*blinks*
Now that's a subject I haven't seen before.
Hope it doesn't come from experience.
Well expressed marital lament . |
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