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The Pleading Cry
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I want to die
I want to lie on the ground
I want to die
I want to just look around
I have no reason to live
I have all the reason to give
but I don’t see why
I have to live
I want to die
this world has been against me
this world is closing on me
I’ll never cry again
if only I could
if only I could
if only I could die
I wouldn’t feel the pain
I have nothing to gain
in this world
at night everyone can hear me cry
oh, God, I want to die
I walk the streets at night
without any light
just plain darkness
like how it’s been with me
everything is disappearing
where is everything I love
laughing in my face
she stole my life
is it always like this
we rode through lovers’ lane
all I saw were black roses
she saw me crying
she said I looked like I was dying
oh, God, I want to die
I want to die
and end it now
I looked up and saw black light
just put a blade through my heart
put me into the fire
and watch me burn
then you can cry
I’m sick of it all
just leave me to die
I don’t want you anymore
you’re nothing
you’re nothing at all
I’m nothing
I’m nothing worth nothing
oh, God, why me
why me
why
Copyright ©
williamdye
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2004-03-30 21:51:14]
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Re: The Pleading Cry
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:07:49 PM AEST
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i can see where your coming from.. great write*:) KeEp it ^ *~
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Re: The Pleading Cry
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by cheech on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:12:02 PM AEST
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very interesting!!very nice!!!VERY SAD!!i really hope this was just a poem of harsh feelings,i hope u don't plan on do'n someth'n that u really shouldn't,ur write'n makes me think ur very young,its normal to feel that way for most peeps,anyways i liked this alot,it was loud and heartfelt
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Re: The Pleading Cry
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:38:03 AM AEST
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I can't tell you how many times I wanted to die and felt what you wrote in this poem but for one you're not worth nothing if you can write such a heart felt poem! It's a talent and I'm sure you have more. Don't let ppl and life put you down a friend told me "Our greatest glory is not falling but rising up every time we fall" It's a wonderful qoute keep writing and remember bad things happen but also good ones. Huggs
Anne :D |
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