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Just Another Suicide

Contributed by williamdye on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:48:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

walking through the meadows
everything turned black
lost and terrified
I turned and saw you laughing
I tried to run back
my heart was terrorized
I’m in desperation
I tried to reach out
and hold you
I yelled and screamed
but no one could hear me
I tried to run
but I couldn’t move
what is wrong with me
what is wrong with me
where am I
this shade of black came closer
and passed me up
I fell to my knees
and cried, cried my eyes out
I saw an image of your face
but you turned and cried or laughed
I couldn’t tell
then I realized, realized I was dead
I turned and lay flat on my face
I wish I were there with you
they’ll all say
it was just another suicide
I never knew if you loved me
you never really told me
I wish I were alive
if you only knew

I got to my knees
and staggered around
trees and flowers were dying
I must have traveled many miles
but all the surroundings
looked the same
I looked up to the sky
and saw you looking
down on me
you were crying, oh how you were crying
I felt your tears
oh how you were crying
it felt like acid rain
well I guess you loved me
I’ll never really know
oh God how I’m so sorry
if only I were alive

Copyright Â© williamdye ... [ 2004-03-30 21:48:05]
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Re: Just Another Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:49:34 PM AEST
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wow this grabbed my heart... I felt the emotion in this another wonderfully written poem.

Bobo (Joel)

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