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Weave
Contributed by
MonicaM
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:14:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Seems you have webbed me in your weave
The way you seized me
deceived me
feed on my bleed
Bled-dry
(I) vomit you
Repelled
Rebelled
Broke out of your love spell
My tiny cell (s)
fought the dejection infection
(In retrospection,)
for freedom came by my own rejection
Copyright ©
MonicaM
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2004-03-30 21:14:49]
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Re: Weave
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:17:51 PM AEST
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| wow...that was different...what did this lloyd do? good write |
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Re: Weave
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:13:26 PM AEST
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Strange and unique.
Great write. |
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Re: Weave
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:50:14 PM AEST
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| Interesting....do you need to talk to someone? Look around....the next smiling face may have a listening ear. I care. |
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Re: Weave
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by MonicaM on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:54:18 PM AEST
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| Pam, you know you are wrong, but thanks... |
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Re: Weave
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:55:39 PM AEST
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| Interesting....do you need to talk to someone? Look around....the next smiling face may have a listening ear. I care. |
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Re: Weave
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:20:03 PM AEST
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| Why??? |
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Re: Weave
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:15:10 AM AEST
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Floyd. Nice name. Nice poem. Nice start.
Welcome.
Hi Pam. |
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