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14 tears
Contributed by
carebear
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:31:18 PM in AEST
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1 tear
Is to cause the pain
2 tears
Here comes the rain
3 tears
To break a promise
4 tears
Screaming out her name
5 tears
Is numbing the healing
6 tears
I have no feelings
7 tears
I'll confesse my sins
8 tears
over coming my fears
9 tears
to stop the mending
10 tears
drowding the hurtful love
11 tears
washing away the past
12 tears
painting your expressions
13 tears
aching for freedom
14 tears
unfolding secrets
© C.S "04"
Copyright ©
carebear
... [
2004-03-30 20:31:18]
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Re: 14 tears
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:23:32 PM AEST
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wow,this was different but i liked it......lots of emotion
luv always |
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Re: 14 tears
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:45:09 PM AEST
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wow this was awesome Care I liked it a lot. Definitely different but I think thats what made it all the better.
Peace,
Joel |
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Re: 14 tears
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:46:35 PM AEST
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| This is really well done! |
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