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Brought Down
Contributed by
cheech
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:05:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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he never thought i would do this
i never thought i would do this
but times are getting too hard
to bare with,too hard
its taken me too many months
to fix things,i've destroyed too much
everytime i look to the sky,i wonder why
i look to the future,but i can't
look no further,i've been brouht
down,right to the ground
months gone by,and still you lie
not a single day goes on that you
don't lie,seeing you i cry
thinking about all the good times
my head goes round and round
thinking about all the bad times
my head goes round and round
this one day,so happy,will come in my way
its gonna take awhile,my head
is full with many thoughts
i might as well be dead
i do care,its not fair,i can't
be here anymore,so i'll meet
you there,and i'll share
i look to the future,but i can't
look no further,i've been brouht
down,right to the ground
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cheech
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2004-03-30 20:05:18]
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Re: Brought Down
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by arden on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:12:18 PM AEST
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very interesting and sad. i like how you wrote this very cool. enjoyed this one alot. awesome job keep it up.
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Re: Brought Down
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:37:04 PM AEST
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| This is really well done! Excellent work! |
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