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Silent Prayer
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:37:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take away the pain.
Take away this air I breathe
and make it all change.
Take away the pain.
Take away my life,
take away my love.
Please take away the pain.
Make it stop,
let it go away.
Let me forget.
Please.
Take away the pain.
And never come back.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2004-03-30 19:37:04]
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Re: Silent Prayer
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:47:07 PM AEST
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No longer a silent prayer.. but indeed a great write...
luck to you
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Re: Silent Prayer
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:47:33 PM AEST
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this is sad...very good!..so emotional
luv always |
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