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FREEZE
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:45:26 PM in AEST
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"FREEZE!"
I've prayed for this day to come!
A perfect day of ease, and freedom!
I must explain what I mean here!
Saying or doing anything you want, without fear!
Just yell "FREEZE!" and no one moves!
Neither can they hear, or see you, it grooves!
Saying or doing all the things you don't dare!
One whole day of "anything goes" with a flair!
Our bathtub is badly clogged up tight!
Plumber arrives, new carpet looks all right!
Returning, he's ruined it with his tools!
'FREEZE" I yell...kick in the butt, bathtub drools!
Neighbor screams and cusses all day long!
Dogs bark, my nerves ain't all that strong!
Door opened, I scream "FREEZE" then a
piece of my mind!
Humped over his car, he doesn't know I'm unkind!
Wow, this is truly great. I'm getting braver!
Telephone conversation turns from nice to vulgar!
"FREEZE" "Now you listen to me you old greezer!
I'm sick and tired of being lied to *&^%$(*!@
no censor!
Wowwwwweeeeee this is really lots of fun,
whose next?
Electric Co. I'm giggling hard as I find their text!
Hello? 'FREEZE" remember that last bill I got?
"It was too blasted high...Crooks, Robbers,
Out house Pot!
Computer techs.....Oh, Dear God, please just
one more?
Remember me? "FREEZE" "You dirty boogers
Condors!
Broke my computer, said you'd degerm it
you louse!
Can't tell a spy from a thief, it's gone 'cept
my mouse!
One 'FREEZE" left. This one will be very special!
Door opens, in walks Mont..."FREEZE"
be very careful!
My arms 'round his neck, 1/2 Nelson, he's down!
I'm too old? Count of three, touchdown!!!
But woe is Me!
I'm plumb tuckered out!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 30, 2004
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"I love exclamation marks
Can you tell?
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Before you give somebody
a piece of your mind,
be sure you can get by with
what you have left!!!"
"Weary Smiles to You!"
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lovingcritters
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Re: FREEZE
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:53:14 PM AEST
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*grins* oh if only you could... this is cute, i love it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: FREEZE
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by norm on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:22:15 PM AEST
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It is a wonderful idea and poem
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I want all to stop so I say FREEZE,
It seems to work but if you please,
If all does stop and I should sneeze,
I'd have to watch my Q's and P's |
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Re: FREEZE
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:37:41 PM AEST
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~laughs with excitment~... wow this is extremly unique ... i highly liked this.. so real and fresh.. oh and i so long to jus have one day where thing would go my way...
excellent write (two thumbs up_
~neglected1~ |
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Re: FREEZE
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by Baronhawk on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:46:19 PM AEST
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Nice one..if only such things were possible...I would be yelling "FREEZE" too. Ha ha ha ha
My fantasy is to be able to use the tv remote on the day... you know play rewind and pause...similar perhaps..ha ha ha
how we chafe at this collar we wear... our obedience to social grace and laws.
perchance to "FREEZE" ha ha ha ha .. |
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Re: FREEZE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:19:29 PM AEST
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How clever. What fun this would be. Oh I can just think of the marvelous things I could do. Gave me a big laugh here, my friend.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: FREEZE
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:15:40 AM AEST
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Ahh I'd really love that! Lol Freeze!! Awesome write! Loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: FREEZE
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:20:07 AM AEST
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| Wouldnt that be great! loved this one of yours as I do all of them! Christina |
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Re: FREEZE
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:40:14 PM AEST
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| interesting concept connie, i think we could all use a good strong freeze button hehe, big hugs n' love ya, nessa |
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Re: FREEZE
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:53:46 PM AEST
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You know I certainly could relate to this one.
*Smiles*
So many times in silence I have given someone a piece of mind. Unfortunately i'm the only one who heard it!
Loved your poem ConSue...... Kie |
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Re: FREEZE
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:52:28 AM AEST
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DON'T WE ALL WISH LIFE WAS A BREEZE & COULD YELL OUT FREEZE! CUTE POEM & A LOVELY THOUGHT!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: FREEZE
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by silent on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:20:09 AM AEST
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lol, very well done my dear friend, If only that were the case.... :)
Thank you for your comments...
With love,
Silent |
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