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live my life
Contributed by
mindset
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:38:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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many i feel have listend
few ever understand
live my life a road of endless
shall we ever be the same
questions many yet so few answers
or is it just both are just the same
endless feel time struct turning wheel
has to be an end to all this *****
all i wanted was to be the same
man moaning roaming ending real
feel the female be together
reading this you think you know the letter
alone i am a home i seek
yet yesterday a different think
time a change endless reality
it will be not be forever.
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2004-03-30 18:38:03]
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Re: live my life
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:56:48 PM AEST
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peculiar structural integrity breeds gerbils... lots of gerbils... *smiles* ... oooo, i love you're originality! great writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: live my life
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by mindset on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:13:11 PM AEST
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| much appreciated remy just the way it is for me at the moment i feel like gushing words pooring from inside dont know where it will lead or maybe just sit and stare maybe :) |
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