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Black Ribbon
Contributed by
Elf
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A simple black ribbon
To hide my transgression
A single black bow
to hide my pain.
Tied around my wrist
As if I'm making a statement.
But, lo, I am
you just don't see it.
If you untie my black ribbon.
you'll find the marks of my sin.
If you take off my bow,
you'll find the marks of a razor
So leave it alone.
I want to keep it hidden.
For if they see it,
I'll be drugged and dragged away.
I like my freedom as it it.
Though full of pain and strife.
I'll keep my black ribbon,
I'll keep my black bow.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2004-03-30 18:07:43]
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Re: Black Ribbon
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by Elf on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:11:07 PM AEST
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for those of you that are still suicidal out there, we do care.
Check out Good Charlotte's "Hold On."
It saved my life. Maybe it'll help you.
Even if you just lok up the lyrics.
Mail me if anyone wants to talk.
-*Valen*- |
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Re: Black Ribbon
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:13:38 PM AEST
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| i understand why you feel the way that you do and i understand why you do what you do... physical evidence you can see it becomes like your reality .... and its a lot easier to understand when you can see something vs. just feeling something.... if you ever need to chat drop me a line... i have a lot of insight in things like this.... feel better and keep writing :) |
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Re: Black Ribbon
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by TeenageEmoGirl on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:02:11 PM AEST
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| i like this poem a lot, i like your style and the overall flow. good job. |
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Re: Black Ribbon
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by nightrider on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:47:35 PM AEST
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my ribbon is yellow.
good write, keep your chin up.
~deb |
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