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Aura of Flame
Contributed by
Calvin
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I saw today a single ship
sailing on a cloud,
drifting over silver seas
I saw it burn
I saw it fall
and sink into the night.
I watched the flames burn on,
down into the abyss,
devouring the darkness.
The blaze increased
as the tips licked and
boiled the surface.
bubbling, growing,
the aura of flames
erupted throughout
the waters as
it surfaced again.
Canvas of Fire and
Vessel of Embers.
Copyright ©
Calvin
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2004-03-30 17:54:20]
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Re: Aura of Flame
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:04:00 PM AEST
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dreamy spiritualized blob of writing, whoa... that's a crap way of saying good job, lol... GOOD JOB! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Aura of Flame
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:19:53 PM AEST
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| wow this is a very strong write... so vivid... nice work :) |
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