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I forgive you
Contributed by
whocares
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:50:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I think it's time for me to tell you
what i truly feel inside.
That i have finaly forgiven you,
that there is no reason to hide.
I wish i could have told you sooner
but my lesson had not been learnt.
I finaly understand why you did it.
Why you left mother and i in so much hurt.
She cried all night you know
And worked hard all day.
She took to the bottle
to drink all her pain away
At first i hated you,
i was so damn mad!
But then i started to wonder,
What made you leave all you've ever had?
It's been 13 years now
and i finaly understand.
The reason you left me and mommy
I can now relate to firsthand
They say it's hereditary,
that you probably had it too.
I'm dying of cancer father,
and there is nothing you can do.
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whocares
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2004-03-30 17:50:02]
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Re: I forgive you
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:24:16 PM AEST
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| sometimes dreams give us the best inspiration.... i like the last stanza its very emotional.... :) |
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Re: I forgive you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:23:59 PM AEST
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:-| wow thats sad...
Very nicely written...i wasnt expecting it to end that way...
-WWD |
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Re: I forgive you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:48:18 PM AEST
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OMG really really good
i loved it kinda sad tho ne wayz great job and u should consentrate more on english class young lady! ne wayz like i said young shakespear
love ya im proud of u ! |
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