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Havoc
Contributed by
Elf
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:49:29 PM in AEST
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Oh, the havoc that floods my soul.
That fills me with the hatred
that none can console.
Oh, the pain that breaks my heart.
For my dearly beloved.
From whom I must part.
The rage built within
Begs for its release
Begs to begin again.
Oh, the havoc that floods my soul.
For my dearly beloved.
And none can console.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2004-03-30 17:49:29]
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Re: Havoc
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:24:09 PM AEST
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that's why i insist you buy a squishy teddy, they don't have to console... just great for hugs and stuff. great writing, hope things will be looking better soon... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Havoc
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:15:02 AM AEST
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| Time heals if you let it. Nice poem nonetheless. |
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Re: Havoc
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by ivoryA on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:03:30 PM AEST
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| i dont know what to say other then that was a very well written poem it looks like you spent time on it and that really paid off.......you write very well |
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