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Oh No
Contributed by
Luxx
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:38:38 PM in AEST
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I want to kill you,
I want to watch you suffer,
With that last desperate gaze,
I'll tell you that I love you
Copyright ©
Luxx
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2004-03-30 17:38:38]
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Re: Oh No
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by arden on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:35:58 PM AEST
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short.. interesting. i like it!
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Re: Oh No
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:25:27 AM AEST
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The title interests me more than the actual poem. Why choose this title, for a poem which is in truth, portraying a deranged perspective on such a beautiful emotion?
Anyway, mystification apart, this is rather chilling. If you write a whole stanza on each line here, you could have an excellent poem, as it stands, this one's not bad. Not bad at all. |
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