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breathe in, breathe out
Contributed by
spider
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Hands shaking
Blood and tears dripping from face
Gun in hand
Trigger slippery with blood
Breathe in, breathe out
Lie down and try to forget
Try to push the screaming out
Open barrel, load cartridge
Breathe in, breathe out
Close barrel, put gun to head,
Wrap fingers tight round trigger
Tense the muscles
Breathe in
Hear the slow click
Nothing more
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2004-03-30 17:35:32]
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Re: breathe in, breathe out
(User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:21:58 PM AEST
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| dont take ur life... people need you to write poetry to know that there are people like them in the world that feel the same way they do :) its such a sad write but well written |
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Re: breathe in, breathe out
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by tinybitinsane on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 08:41:57 PM AEST
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| ooh wow i love this!! |
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